Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03

From: Meral Shirazipour <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 17 Apr 2015 02:39:29 +0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at  http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-layout-types-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-04-16
IETF LC End Date:  2015-04-16
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but it has some nits.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 1], Abstract, "those those specifically", remove extra "those"
-[Page 6], end of 3.2, "if at all possible,"--->"if at all possible."
-[Page 6], section 3.3, "separably"--->"separately"
- [Page 10], ref [FlexFiles] has a new version 05 now
- [Page 10], ref [Lustre]  is expired. Should be removed?

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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