Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

From: Meral Shirazipour <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 25 Nov 2015 23:52:36 +0000

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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-11-25
IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15
IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types is"
-[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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