Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt

From: Jari Arkko <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 3 Dec 2015 14:09:02 +0200

Francis, many thanks for your review! And thanks Ram of taking care of the edits.

Jari

On 18 Nov 2015, at 10:22, Ram Mohan R (rmohanr) <[email-masked]> wrote:

> Hi Francis,
> 
> Thanks for your feedback. I will address all your nits.
> 
> Regards,
> Ram
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Francis Dupont <[email-masked]>
> Date: Wednesday, 18 November 2015 at 1:37 PM
> To: "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>
> Cc: "[email-masked]"
> <[email-masked]>
> Subject: review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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>> Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt
>> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
>> Review Date: 20151112
>> IETF LC End Date: 20151117
>> IESG Telechat date: 20151203
>> 
>> Summary: Ready
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues: None
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> (very minor)
>> - 3.1.1 figure 1 page 5: a= fingerprint1 -> a=fingerprint1
>> 
>> - 7 page 9: comments,suggestions, -> comments, suggestions,
>> 
>> - Authors' Addresses page 11: as the first two authors work at
>>  the same place one can expect exactly the same address (:-)
>> 
>> Regards
>> 
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