Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07

From: Lucy yong <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 28 Nov 2016 16:35:46 +0000

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Document: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07

     Credit Windowing extension for DLEP

Reviewer: Lucy Yong

Review Date: 28-Nov-2016

IETF LC End Date: 28-Nov-2016

IESG Telechat date: 29-Nov-2016

Summary: This document specifies a technique for a fine-grained flow control in radio communication. It is well-written and ready for publishing. Note: 07 version is published recently and is reviewed.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 9.1, revise "If credits are to used on a destination, ...", to make it readable.

Regards,

Lucy