Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avtext-avpf-ccm-layered-03

From: Jari Arkko <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 5 Jan 2017 13:14:16 +0200

Thanks for the review Vijay, and everyone for the discussion.

I think I’m fine with the section headings as they are; it is clear at least to me what is meant. The choice between a sentence at the beginning of the section or in the section title should be up to you, as long as the end result is clear.

Jari