Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-cms-ecdh-new-curves-07

From: Russ Housley <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 4 Jun 2017 12:09:18 -0400

Roni:

Thanks for the review.  I believe that -09 resolves your comments.

Russ

> On May 25, 2017, at 6:57 AM, Roni Even <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-curdle-cms-ecdh-new-curves-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-05-25
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-28
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> 
> In general it was easy to read and follow.  Maybe it will be good to
> repeat in section 3.2 the definition of KeyAgreeRecipientInfo . This
> is done is section 2 for ECC-CMS-SharedInfo but it is not crucial.
> 
> 1. There is no ToC
> 2. In section 2.2 fourth paragraph "is used two places" - "in two .."
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