Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10

From: Meral Shirazipour <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2017 21:38:46 +0000

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Document: draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-10-13
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards RFC .

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 13], "handling of collections ealier "--->"handling of collections earlier "
-Please spell out IRI (Internationalized Resource Identifiers) at first use

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com