Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Ice] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle-16

From: Alissa Cooper <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 3 Apr 2018 09:39:41 -0400

Roni, thanks for your review. Peter, thanks for your response. I have entered a Yes ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 12, 2018, at 1:39 PM, Peter Saint-Andre <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> On 2/11/18 5:54 AM, Roni Even wrote:
>> Reviewer: Roni Even
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>> 
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>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-ice-trickle-??
>> Reviewer: Roni Even
>> Review Date: 2018-02-11
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08
>> 
>> Summary:
>> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
>> Major issues:
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> In appendix B third paragraph "When performing full trickle, a full ICE
>> implementation could conveying the initial ICE description or response thereto
>> ..."  change to "convey"
> 
> Noted and fixed under source control:
> 
> https://github.com/ice-wg/trickle/commit/3c86705bd211e1b5bc2c8f7fc199ec2c2db7595d#diff-f7ced034e08b14404c7832d8f5f19567
> 
> Thanks for the review!
> 
> Peter
> 
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