Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

From: Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 17 Jun 2019 03:05:29 -0700

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-06-17
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This is very much a review by a non-specialist. The document is well
written, but has a small number of nits that need looking at before publication.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

ID-Nits points out the following:
  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4091
     (Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4092
     (Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
>From the text it looks like the updated RFC should be the reference that this
memo uses.

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The following abbreviations are not in the RFC Editor's well known list and
should be expanded on first use:
    STUN
    SDP
    FQDN
    PSTN