Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-13

From: Qin Wu <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 27 Jun 2020 07:02:21 +0000

Thanks Meral for valuable review and will incorporate your comments in v-14.

-Qin
发件人: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:[email-masked]]
发送时间: 2020年6月27日 14:13
收件人: [email-masked]; [email-masked]
主题: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-13

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-13

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2020-*06-26
IETF LC End Date: 2020-*06-25
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
Is it possible to add in the abstract and or intro where the info of the topology information is to be used?
Maybe borrowing some text from RFC8345.

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 21], Section 6, "NMDA-complient"---->"NMDA-compliant"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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