Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01

From: Lars Eggert <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 3 Feb 2022 12:50:11 +0200

Vijay, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars

> On 2022-1-11, at 20:48, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2022-01-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard.
> 
> Major issues: 0
> 
> Minor issues: 0
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 1
> 
> In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/
> (Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]).
> [1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> - vijay
> 
> 
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