Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08

From: Lars Eggert <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 7 Mar 2022 13:11:31 +0200

Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a Yes ballot for this document.

Lars

> On 2022-1-20, at 21:10, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-08
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2022-01-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: A well written document ready for publication. It has couple of very
> tiny nits that could usefully be addressed.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> ALPN is not well known and should be expanded on first use. It would be useful
> to note that “doq” is a string. This is clarified below, but it is proposed
> that that text be removed.
> 
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