Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-12: (with COMMENT)

From: Rafa Marin-Lopez <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 13:43:51 +0100

Dear Robert:

Thank you very much for your comments. Certainly existing RFCs proposing yang modules do not include them as appendices. We will follow your suggestion and move that part to the main body of the document as a new section.

Best Regards.

> El 5 nov 2020, a las 15:22, Robert Wilton via Datatracker <[email-masked]> escribió:
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> draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-12: No Objection
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> There has already been some extensive discussion regarding the YANG models and
> the YANG model structure, so thank you for accommodating these changes and
> making the modules more widely reusable.
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> I note that you have included the YANG modules as appendices rather than in the
> main body of the document.  Given that the YANG module text is normative, and
> the main component of this specification, it would be better to follow the
> convention from other existing RFCs containing YANG modules and document the
> YANG modules in the main body of the document, probably as a new section before
> section 7 (IANA considerations).
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> Regards,
> Rob
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