Subject: [ietf-dkim] ISSUE: various minor documentation enhancements

From: Dave Crocker <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 31 May 2008 10:08:26 -0700

ssp-03 should make the following minor enhancements, per 
draft-levine-dkim-adsp-00:

   Add keywords, to improve Internet search results

> OLD:
>      <keyword>email, e-mail, rfc2822, rfc 2822, rfc822, rfc 822, rfc2821, rfc
>        2821, rfc821, rfc 821, rfc4871, rfc 4871, DKIM, domain keys, ASP,
>        architecture, mta, user, delivery, smtp, submission, Internet, mailfrom,
>        author, return address</keyword>
> 
> NEW:
> 
>      <keyword>email, e-mail, rfc2822, rfc 2822, rfc822, rfc 822, rfc2821, rfc
>        2821, rfc821, rfc 821, rfc4871, rfc 4871, DKIM, domain keys, domainkeys,
>        ADSP, ADSP, SSP, architecture, mta, user, delivery, smtp, submission,
>        email, e-mail, smtp, Internet, mailfrom, mail from, author, return
>        address, sender signing, signing practices</keyword>

   Convert ASP references to ADSP

   Replace relevant references to "Author" to be "Author Domain", and similar 
changes.

   Revise text of last bullet in Results list:

> Section 3., paragraph 13:
> OLD:
> 
>     o  The domain does not exist.
> 
> NEW:
> 
>     o  The domain is not a valid mail domain.
> 

    Move Lookup Procedure up one document level.

    Remove all specification details pertaining to sub-domains.

    Remove definitions not used in the document

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   Dave Crocker
   Brandenburg InternetWorking
   bbiw.net
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