Subject: [ippm] Fwd: Review of draft-morton-ippm-delay-var-as-00

From: Al Morton <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 27 Nov 2006 17:18:38 -0500

IPPM WG,

Following the presentation of the Delay Variation
Applicability Statement at IETF-67,  Benoit Claise
reviewed the draft and shared his comments with me.
I have updated the draft based on Benoit's suggestions,
as summarized below:

* Re-wrote the Abstract.

* Added references for the *many* definitions of delay variation.

* Added more background on the term Jitter and why we prefer to use DV.

* Clarified the Purpose and Scope section in several ways.

* Reorganized the Tasks and Circumstances Section & clarified several items.

* Noted that the Spatial Composition of delay variation in not trivial.

* Added a new task on assessing Service Level Committments.

* Inserted more introductory material where the 2 forms of DV are described.

The revised version -delay-var-as-01.txt will soon be available in the
Internet-Draft directories, and an HTML version is now available here:
http://home.comcast.net/~acmacm/
I've also placed a side-by-side diff version there.

Additional comments are encouraged.
Al

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