Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09

From: <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 3 Sep 2021 14:38:32 +0000

Hi Victoria, 

Many thanks for the review. 

All the nits are now fixed in https://tinyurl.com/vpn-common-latest. Will further think about your point related to Section 3. 
 
Cheers,
Med

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> Objet : Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09
> 
> Reviewer: Victoria Pritchard
> Review result: Has Nits
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this
> draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or
> routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG
> review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review
> is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
> For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see 
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09
> Reviewer: Victoria Pritchard
> Review Date: 24th August 2021
> Intended Status: Standards Track
> 
> Summary:
> This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that
> should be considered prior to publication.
> 
> Comments:
> This is a concise document, indicating clearly where it fits, what
> it defines, and how it should be used. Seems a good idea to have the
> common things in a re-usable module.
> 
> Major Issues:
> No major issues found.
> 
> Minor issues:
> No minor issues found.
> 
> Nits:
> In Section 3, I think it might be easier to read if each grouping
> was shown individually with the accompanying explanation next to the
> diagram. In Section 4, I noticed some typos: In the inbound-bw
> feature, defines -> defined "identity igmpv3" description states
> IGMPv2 adminisitrative -> administrative (seen in a few places)
> "list forwarding-profile-identifier": Forwrding -> Forwarding
> 
> 

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