Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17

From: [email-masked]
Date: Wed, 27 Oct 2021 10:32:59 +0800 (GMT+08:00)

Dear Suresh,

Please see below our latest revision of the Path Vector draft (-19). We have
added IPv6 examples for each endpoint-based example. We hope this addresses
your comments.

Draft:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-19.html

Diffs:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17&amp;url2=draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-19

Thanks!

Best,
Kai

&gt; -----Original Messages-----
&gt; From: [email-masked]
&gt; Sent Time: 2021-08-31 00:26:49 (Tuesday)
&gt; To: "Suresh Krishnan" <[email-masked]>
&gt; Cc: [email-masked], [email-masked], [email-masked], [email-masked]
&gt; Subject: Re: [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17
&gt; 
&gt; Hi Suresh,
&gt; 
&gt; Thanks for the comment. We will add IPv6 examples in Section 8 in the next revision as soon as possible.
&gt; 
&gt; Best,
&gt; Kai
&gt; 
&gt; "Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker" &lt;[email-masked]&gt;wrote:
&gt; &gt; Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
&gt; &gt; Review result: Ready with Nits
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
&gt; &gt; Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
&gt; &gt; by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
&gt; &gt; like any other last call comments.
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; For more information, please see the FAQ at
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; <https: trac.ietf.org="" trac="" gen="" wiki="" genartfaq="">.
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Document: draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-??
&gt; &gt; Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
&gt; &gt; Review Date: 2021-08-30
&gt; &gt; IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-25
&gt; &gt; IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Summary:
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Overall, the document is well done and easy to read for someone with a
&gt; &gt; background in past work done at alto.
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Major issues:
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Minor issues:
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Nits/editorial comments:
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; Please add some IPv6 examples in Section 8.
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; 
&gt; &gt; _______________________________________________
&gt; &gt; alto mailing list
&gt; &gt; [email-masked]
&gt; &gt; https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
&gt; _______________________________________________
&gt; alto mailing list
&gt; [email-masked]
&gt; https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
</https:></[email-masked]>