Subject: Typos in LTAP draft 6

From: "Paweł Skarżyński" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 23 Aug 2008 14:29:49 +0200

Hello!

While I was reading the doc, I found some typos. So here they are, I
hope that it will be helpful:

1. Page 12, second paragraph after L4:
currently: "(not necssarily"
should be: "(not necessarily"

2. Page 23, the last paragraph (section 4.3.)
currently: "The 'type' identfies "
should be: "The 'type' identifies"

currently: "similar way as withe MIBs"
should be: "similar way as with MIBs"
OR
should be: "similar way as with the MIBs"

3. Page 31, Section 4.13.
currently: "The response is an second" (repeated twice, line by line)
should be: "The response is a second"

4, Page 38, third 'bullet' from top in section 6.1.
currently: "If this a retry of a previous operation,"
should be: "If this is a retry of a previous operation,"

5. Page 41, paragraph 1, first sentence:
currently: "This memo defines are two basic ways"
should be: "This memo defines two basic ways"

6. Page 41, paragraph 1, last sentence:
currently: "for XML encoded requesta nd responses."
should be: "for XML encoded request and responses."

7. Page 41, paragraph 4:
currently: "LTAPRequest or LTAPResponse are used, an not an XER version"
should be: "LTAPRequest or LTAPResponse are used, and not an XER version"

8. Page 44, second paragraph of section 7.4.
currently: "When an end user client creates a request, there are only
one signerInfo"
should be: "When an end user client creates a request, there is only
one signerInfo"

9. Page 46, last sentence of second paragraph:
currently: "Aa LTA MAY profide for a service to validate"
should be: "An LTA MAY profide for a service to validate"

I am also pretty sure that there was at least one typo before the
first mentioned by me, but I didn't started making notices from the
begining of the memo and now I couldn't find it.

Pawel Skarzynski