Subject: DOC-BUG: documentation bugs in -core

From: Daniel Quinlan <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 23 Aug 2004 16:19:44 -0700

A few minor issues:

a. all-uppercase words in -core

   "DOMAIN" is used only once in all-uppercase (in 2.1).  RFC 2822
   doesn't appear to use it that way.  Same issue for "MOST RECENT" and
   "UNRELATED" (both in 2.1).

b. "domain" is not defined in -core and other documents

   For clarity, "domain" should be defined as an RFC 2822 domain.  That
   is, it should be defined as the right-hand-side of an email address.

c. to fix some awkwardness in the introduction, I suggest this
   replacement:

   s/substantially all of the/nearly all/

-- 
Daniel Quinlan
http://www.pathname.com/~quinlan/