Subject: Re: [MBONED] recharter text

From: Ronald Bonica <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 24 Jul 2012 10:21:56 -0400

Tom,

Do you have alternative text that you prefer? While I am not promising to adopt it, we can at least discuss the differences.

                                                 Ron

> 
> So I see Ron deleted the word "transition" from the last bullet after
> all. In Paris we had wordsmithed the bullet without doing that.
>