Subject: Re: [Mipshop] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-mobileip-lmm-requirements-04.txt

From: "[email-masked]" <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 15 Jan 2004 16:45:53 -0500

Hi James,

  Thanks for reviewing the document so quickly!
  
  I will take a pass through and correct these
  (and possible others). 

  Carl

Original Message:
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From: James Kempf [email-masked]
Date: Thu, 15 Jan 2004 11:56:00 -0800
To: [email-masked], [email-masked], [email-masked]
Subject: Re: [Mipshop] WG Last Call for 
draft-ietf-mobileip-lmm-requirements-04.txt

I looked through the new Security Considerations section and the content
looks OK, but it needs an editing pass. Spellings are British English as
opposed to American (minimise v.s. minimize) so one or the other should be
selected for the entire document and there is one other point:

>   trust is manifested in the amount of space and resources that the LMM
>   agent that is receiving packets from another LMM agent is ready do
>   reserve and use.

"to reserve and use"

        jak

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "gabriel montenegro" <[email-masked]>
To: <[email-masked]>
Cc: <[email-masked]>
Sent: Thursday, January 15, 2004 9:45 AM
Subject: [Mipshop] WG Last Call for
draft-ietf-mobileip-lmm-requirements-04.txt

> Folks,
>
> This message starts a MIPSHOP WG last call on:
>
> Localized Mobility Management Goals
>
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mipshop-lmm-requirements-01.t
xt
>
> This draft will be sent to the IESG for advancement as Informational RFC.
>
> Please send your comments to the [email-masked] discussion list.
>
> WG Last call issued on : Jan 15, 2004
> Expires on : Jan 22, 2004
>
> Just to clarify: You may recall that the previous version of this
> document already underwent working group last call:
>
>     WG Last call
>          started:        oct 16, 2003
>          completed:      oct 30, 2003
>
> As a result of that, a security considerations section (amongst
> sundry other editorial changes) was added. This change was deemed
> significant enough that we are now having this second (short)
> working group last call.
>
> tnx,
>
> -gabriel
>
>
>
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