Subject: [Mipshop] draft-ietf-mipshop-mstp-solution-03: change log since v1

From: "Telemaco Melia (tmelia)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 28 Apr 2008 11:13:02 +0200

Hi all,
 
Please find below the modifs applied to v3.
The authors thank all the reviewers for their comments, addressed in
this new version.
 
cheers,
Telemaco

Change log
==========
 
Technical changes
=================
End of section 5.2, to address the issue of resolving failures raised by
Kevin
 
The new paragraph reads: 
"When the discovery of an MoS at the visited network, using the FQDN

			returned in the reverse DNS query, is not
successful, the MN MAY		
			attempt to remove portions from the left side of
the FQDN and attempt		
			discovery again. The process MAY be repeated
iteratively until a		
			successful discovery."
 
End of section 5.3, to address the issue of having similar mechanisms
for IPv4 raised by Kevin
 
The new paragraph reads:
"
This section assumes the use of IPv6 and DHCPv6 based mechanisms to

			discover MoS services in home while the MN is in
visited network. If		
			similar functionalities are desired for IPv4
additional DHCPv4		
			extensions would be required. Since use cases
requiring these		
			extensions were not identified at the time of
writing this document,		
			they were excluded from the scope of the
document."	
 
End of section 6.3, the following paragraph has been removed (issue
raised by Yoshi)
 
"
Additionally, instead of retransmitting an unacknowledged message,

	the MIH may choose to update the information and transmit a new

	message.	
"
 
Editorial changes
=================
 
All changes suggested by the different reviewers have been
considered/edited.
IDnits fixed too.
 
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