Subject: [MMUSIC] Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-tcp-00

From: "Even, Roni" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 25 Apr 2006 16:37:48 +0300

Hi,
Two more editorial comments:

1. In section 9 second paragraph "successul" should be "successful"

2. In section 7 " since it is the STUN requests identify the candidate pairs." I think that a "that" is missing after the "STUN requests"

Roni Even

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