Subject: [MMUSIC] [Errata Rejected] RFC4583 (4111)

From: RFC Errata System <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2014 17:42:06 -0700 (PDT)

The following errata report has been rejected for RFC4583,
"Session Description Protocol (SDP) Format for Binary Floor Control Protocol (BFCP) Streams".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=4583&eid=4111

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Status: Rejected
Type: Editorial

Reported by: Christian Groves <[email-masked]>
Date Reported: 2014-09-14
Rejected by: Richard Barnes (IESG)

Section: 9

Original Text
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For the purpose of brevity, the main portion of the session
   description is omitted in the examples, which only show 'm' lines and
   their attributes.

   The following is an example of an offer sent by a conference server
   to a client.

   m=application 50000 TCP/TLS/BFCP *
   a=setup:passive
   a=connection:new
   a=fingerprint:SHA-1 \
        4A:AD:B9:B1:3F:82:18:3B:54:02:12:DF:3E:5D:49:6B:19:E5:7C:AB
   a=floorctrl:s-only
   a=confid:4321
   a=userid:1234
   a=floorid:1 m-stream:10
   a=floorid:2 m-stream:11
   m=audio 50002 RTP/AVP 0
   a=label:10
   m=video 50004 RTP/AVP 31
   a=label:11

...

Corrected Text
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For the purpose of brevity, the main portion of the session
   description is omitted in the examples, which only show 'm' lines and
   their attributes.

   The following is an example of an offer sent by a conference server
   to a client.

   m=application 50000 TCP/TLS/BFCP *
   a=setup:passive
   a=connection:new
   a=fingerprint:SHA-1 \
        4A:AD:B9:B1:3F:82:18:3B:54:02:12:DF:3E:5D:49:6B:19:E5:7C:AB
   a=floorctrl:s-only
   a=confid:4321
   a=userid:1234
   a=floorid:1 mstrm:10
   a=floorid:2 mstrm:11
   m=audio 50002 RTP/AVP 0
   a=label:10
   m=video 50004 RTP/AVP 31
   a=label:11

...

Notes
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In section 6 of the RFC the ABNF for the "floorid" attribute is:
  floor-id-attribute = "a=floorid:" token [" mstrm:" token *(SP token)]

The text string " mstrm:" is used to reference the media stream rather than "m-stream" that appears in the examples.
 --VERIFIER NOTES-- 
The error noted in the erratum is already being addressed in a document that will obsolete this RFC.

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RFC4583 (draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bfcp-03)
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Title               : Session Description Protocol (SDP) Format for Binary Floor Control Protocol (BFCP) Streams
Publication Date    : November 2006
Author(s)           : G. Camarillo
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Multiparty Multimedia Session Control
Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG