Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Draft new version: BUNDLE-14 - Paul's comment

From: Christer Holmberg <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 19 Dec 2014 20:17:15 +0000

Hi,

>This change works for me, with the following minor issue:
>
>In 8.5.2, the following:
>
>    In addition, the offerer MUST indicate that the offerer suggests
>    address as the new offerer BUNDLE address [Section 8.2.2]
>
>doesn't read quite right. IIUC, the following would be clearer:
>
>    In addition, the offerer MUST indicate that the offerer suggested
>    address is the new offerer BUNDLE address [Section 8.2.2]

I think we could make it even simpler, by saying:

	"In addition, the offerer MUST indicate that the address is the
	new suggested offerer BUNDLE address [Section 8.2.2]."

Regards,

Christer