Subject: draft-ietf-dnsext-rfc2672bis-dname-09 UD definition placement

From: Alfred Hönes <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 28 Mar 2008 01:48:21 +0100 (MEZ)

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Another unrelated issue I found in
draft-ietf-dnsext-rfc2672bis-dname-09 :

The definition of the EDNS UD bit currently is placed in
Section 3.2, under the umbrella of Section 3. "Processing".
This does not make much sense to me.

The basice protocol/format definitions underlying the
whole specification should be grouped together.
To obtain a more logical structure of the document,
I therefore recommend to move that definition (artwork
plus basic description of purpose) into Section 2.1.

Kind regards,
  Alfred.

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