Subject: [nfsv4] review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-39.txt

From: "Mora, Jorge" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 2015 19:50:47 +0000

Minor corrections:

*** On the sixth paragraph on section:

4.10.1.1.5.  Finishing or Stopping a Secure Inter-Server Copy

   stored on the destination server.  The destination server will then

   delete the <"copy_to_auth", user id, source list, nounce, nounce MIC,

   context handle, handle version> privilege and the associated

   "copy_confirm_auth" RPCSEC_GSSv3 handle.  The client MUST destroy

What is "nounce"?

What are the "<" and ">"? Is the list enclosed by "<" and ">" related to "privilege"?

*** Spelling error "uiniquely" on second paragraph on section:

4.10.1.2.  Inter-Server Copy via ONC RPC without RPCSEC_GSS

   used to uiniquely identify the destination server to the source

*** Spelling error "delallocates" on 13th paragraph on section:

7.  Space Reservation

   DEALLOCATE  This operation delallocates the blocks backing a region

*** Missing IO_ADVISE from Table 2 on section:

11.2.  New Operations and Their Valid Errors

*** Missing IO_ADVISE from the table "Operations" on section:

13.  Operations: REQUIRED, RECOMMENDED, or OPTIONAL

Also, this table and the next table "Callback Operations" don't have a table number.

These should be "Table 5" and "Table 6" respectively and all other table

numbers must be adjusted.

*** Spelling error "destinaton" on sixth paragraph on section:

15.3.3.  DESCRIPTION

   know which netloc4 network location the destinaton might use to

*** Duplicate word "the the" on 7th paragraph on section:

15.10.3.  DESCRIPTION

   di_length returned MAY be for the entire hole.  If the the owner has

*** Spelling error "o" and "wlll" on 8th paragraph on section:

15.13.3.  DESCRIPTION

   multiple o the clone block size wlll be zeroed.

*** Duplicate word "see see" on 9th paragraph on section:

15.13.3.  DESCRIPTION

   The CLONE operation is atomic in that other operations may not see     <--

   see any intermediate states between the state of the two files before

-Jorge