Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [IANA #1124329] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community (ipfix)

From: li zhenqiang <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 19 Oct 2018 12:26:41 +0000

Many thanks for the expert review. A new version, version 10, has been uploaded to incorporate all the comments.

Best Regards,
Zhenqiang Li
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From: Sabrina Tanamal via RT<mailto:[email-masked]>
Date: 2018-10-15 23:50
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Subject: [IANA #1124329] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community (ipfix)
Dear Authors,

Please see the comments from the expert below:

I'd like to tighten the descriptions so they can stand alone:

    * "zero or more BGP communities" to "basicList of zero or more
bgpCommunity Information Elements" (x2)

    * "zero or more BGP Extended Communities" to "basicList of zero or
more bgpExtendedCommunity Information Elements" (x2)

    * "zero or more BGP Large Communities" to "basicList of zero or
more bgpLargeCommunity Information Elements" (x2)

Note that the information in sections 4.1 - 4.3, 5.1 - 5.3, and 6.1 -
6.3 duplicates the information in section 9. I've suggested to the AD
and shepherd that the duplication be removed.

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Best regards,

Sabrina Tanamal
Senior IANA Servies Specialist