Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-07.txt

From: <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 8 Apr 2021 08:14:12 +0000

Hi all, 

This version integrates the comments received during the WGLC, in particular comments from:

(1) Adrian: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/lJNaDX2pt4sVR0pehlq7NYmq-vw/ 
   * Tweak the introduction text + move some background text to an appendix. 
   * Replace the slice definition I-D with the framework one. We have done that manually as it was impossible to retrieve it automatically using xml2rfc.
   * Fix some missing refs.   
(2) Dhruv: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/riUdy80OUMaYETDZUIIG6irOfcg/ 
   * Update some reference clauses. 
   * Remove the sr-te identity
(3) Wes (tsvart): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/bvRUkpv0UdTo40BFsg7FUE7bdns/  
   * Add a note to cover how transport protocols are intended to be managed in the module. 
(4) Radek (yangdoctors review): https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/Z3jf5ykLHWOt5n_f7e_GXIxVyeM/   
   * Fix a nit in the copyright text
   * remove a "config" 
(5) Paul: Extend RD assignment modes to cover those focusing on the 'Assigned Number" subfield of RD.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : [email-masked] [mailto:[email-masked]]
> Envoyé : jeudi 8 avril 2021 09:47
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN <[email-masked]>; Oscar
> Gonzalez de Dios <[email-masked]>; Oscar de Dios
> <[email-masked]>; Qin WU <[email-masked]>;
> Qin Wu <[email-masked]>; Samier Barguil
> <[email-masked]>; samier barguil
> <[email-masked]>
> Objet : New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-
> 07.txt
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-07.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Mohamed Boucadair and posted to
> the IETF repository.
> 
> Name:		draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common
> Revision:	07
> Title:		A Layer 2/3 VPN Common YANG Model
> Document date:	2021-04-08
> Group:		opsawg
> Pages:		66
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-
> vpn-common-07.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-
> vpn-common/
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-
> opsawg-vpn-common
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-
> common-07
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-
> vpn-common-07
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a common YANG module that is meant to be
> reused
>    by various VPN-related modules such as Layer 3 VPN and Layer 2 VPN
>    network models.
> 
> Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
> 
>    Please update these statements within the document with the RFC
>    number to be assigned to this document:
> 
>    o  "This version of this YANG module is part of RFC XXXX;"
> 
>    o  "RFC XXXX: A Layer 2/3 VPN Common YANG Model";
> 
>    o  reference: RFC XXXX
> 
>    Also, please update the "revision" date of the YANG module.
> 
> 
> 
> 
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> 
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