Subject: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8969 (6904)

From: RFC Errata System <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 29 Mar 2022 22:23:13 -0700 (PDT)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8969,
"A Framework for Automating Service and Network Management with YANG".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6904

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <[email-masked]>

Section: A.3

Original Text
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     +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
     |      Topology YANG modules    |     Tunnel YANG modules       |
     +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
     |  +------------------+         |                               |
     |  |Network Topologies|         | +------+  +-----------+       |
     |  |       Model      |         | |Other |  | TE Tunnel |       |
     |  +--------+---------+         | |Tunnel|  +----+------+       |
     |           |   +---------+     | +------+       |              |
     |           +---+Service  |     |     +----------+---------+    |
     |           |   |Topology |     |     |          |         |    |
     |           |   +---------+     |     |          |         |    |
     |           |   +---------+     |+----+---+ +----+---+ +---+---+|
     |           +---+Layer 3  |     ||MPLS-TE | |RSVP-TE | | SR-TE ||
     |           |   |Topology |     || Tunnel | | Tunnel | |Tunnel ||
     |           |   +---------+     |+--------+ +--------+ +-------+|
     |           |   +---------+     |                               |
     |           +---+TE       |     |                               |
     |           |   |Topology |     |                               |
     |           |   +---------+     |                               |
     |           |   +---------+     |                               |
     |           +---+Layer 3  |     |                               |
     |               |Topology |     |                               |
     |               +---------+     |                               |
     +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+

Corrected Text
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     +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
     |      Topology YANG modules    |     Tunnel YANG modules       |
     +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+
     |  +------------------+         |                               |
     |  |Network Topologies|         | +------+  +-----------+       |
     |  |       Model      |         | |Other |  | TE Tunnel |       |
     |  +--------+---------+         | |Tunnel|  +----+------+       |
     |           |   +---------+     | +------+       |              |
     |           +---+Service  |     |     +----------+---------+    |
     |           |   |Topology |     |     |          |         |    |
     |           |   +---------+     |     |          |         |    |
     |           |   +---------+     |+----+---+ +----+---+ +---+---+|
     |           +---+Layer 3  |     ||MPLS-TE | |RSVP-TE | | SR-TE ||
     |           |   |Topology |     || Tunnel | | Tunnel | |Tunnel ||
     |           |   +---------+     |+--------+ +--------+ +-------+|
     |           |   +---------+     |                               |
     |           +---+TE       |     |                               |
     |           |   |Topology |     |                               |
     |           |   +---------+     |                               |
     |           |   +---------+     |                               |
     |           +---+Layer 2  |     |                               |
     |               |Topology |     |                               |
     |               +---------+     |                               |
     +-------------------------------+-------------------------------+

Notes
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"Layer 3 Topology" is cited twice. "Layer 2 Topology" is missing as per the text right after Figure 9.

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RFC8969 (draft-ietf-opsawg-model-automation-framework-10)
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Title               : A Framework for Automating Service and Network Management with YANG
Publication Date    : January 2021
Author(s)           : Q. Wu, Ed., M. Boucadair, Ed., D. Lopez, C. Xie, L. Geng
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG