Subject: Re: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-05

From: Stephen Kent <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 19 May 2009 19:32:48 -0400

At 3:00 PM -0400 5/19/09, McCann Peter-A001034 wrote:
>I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
>for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
>http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html
><http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ).
>
>Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
>posting a new version of the draft.
>
>Document: draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-05
>Reviewer: Pete McCann
>Review Date: 19 May 2009
>IESG Telechat date: 21 May 2009
>
>Summary: Ready, still 2 nits.
>
>Major issues: none
>Minor issues: none
>Nits/editorial comments:
>
>The acronym CA (Certificate Authority) should be spelled out
>in the Terminology section.
>
>Section 7.1, there is still a typo: s/withing/within

Peter,

I agree that acronyms should be expanded on first use, but the 
acronym CA expands to certification (not certificate) authority.

Steve