Subject: errata and suggestions for 10 Feb 1999 draft schema

From: "Thomas G. McNeill" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 17 Feb 1999 19:55:56 -0700

SUBSTANTIVE PROBLEMS:

Section 5.5.4: The first day of the day is traditionally Sunday, not
Monday. 

Section 5.5.6: In the line beginning with '+' or '-', it is not clear
what the string

	'-' = west = plus:

means

NIT-PICKING:

Section 5.4.5: "comprised of" should be "composed of"

Section 5.4.5.1: "IA%" should be "IA5"?

Section 5.4.6, bullet 2: "C,A,B.D" should be "C,A,B,D"

Section 5.5.5: The example does not make it clear whether the minute
beginning at 11:59:59 is included in the range or not. Suggestion:
change wording to "From 9 PM Tuesday up to but not including 12:00:00
a.m. Wednesday (one minute after 23:59:59 Tuesday"). In any case,
24-hour time should be used.