Subject: [RAI] Minor comments on offeranswer-13

From: Robert Sparks <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 6 Dec 2010 13:02:54 -0600

Consider these with any other LC comments that arrive:

It would help to add a short explanation of the notation used 
in Figure 4 - (UPD)  (2xx-UPD).

In the NOTE: in section 5.2.2, consider saying "a reliable
provisional response", and identify what you are sending
a 200 to when you say "until the 200 is sent). I'm also not
finding the last phrase of the last sentence clear - is there
a better word than "select" for this phrase?

I suggest this text replace the security considerations:

This document does not introduce any security considerations beyond
those described in the documents it references.