Subject: RE: [Seamoby] Progress on WG Last Call for draft-ietf-paging-protocol-assessment-01.txt

From: [email-masked]
Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2002 15:40:01 +0200

Hi James

One general comment on the draft.

Section 4 might stand from some improvement.  I think just trying to
create some subsections, such as

4.0

4.1 Intro 
4.2 Resolution
4.3 Comments on proposed protocols
4.4 Next Steps

Most of the text is there.  Does this make any sense?  I could try editing
the text if need be.

John

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