Subject: [stir] Minor nits - stir-threats-02.text

From: "Mishra, Sanjay" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 24 Feb 2014 11:15:48 -0500

Jon - Minor nits on the Stir-threats-02.

1.       Section 2.2, 4th paragraph - change "an" to "a"

2.       Section 2.2, 5th paragraph - Change "in whole or part..." to "in whole or in part..."

3.       Section 2.2, 5th paragraph - Suggest to move "for example" at the beginning of the sentence rather than at the end.

4.       Section 2.3, last sentence of 2nd to last paragraph - change "is" to "are" in the sentence, "... these sorts of attacks is necessary..."

5.       Section 3.1, 4th paragraph - change "identity are" to either "identities are absent..."or "identity is absent...."

6.       Section 3.2 2nd paragraph - add a comma after "increasingly"

7.       Section 4  under the heading "Impersonation, IP-PSTN-IP  - Remove the word "puts" in the sentence "The PSTN-IP gateway puts takes the calling party number...."

Thanks
Sanjay