Subject: [Suit] draft-ietf-suit-information-model-10

From: Hannes Tschofenig <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 19 Mar 2021 12:01:23 +0000

Hi all,

At the SUIT meeting I mentioned that there are several editorial changes that have not been addressed yet.

With version -10 we are getting closer to address the IESG comments. I have changed text throughout the document and particularly Section 3 "Manifest Information Elements" has seen various changes: the indication about implementation for each information element confused readers. I have clarified that requirements for these elements relate to the manifest specification. This document alone cannot be implemented.

Here is the updated version:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-suit-information-model-10

The changes are highlighted here:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-suit-information-model-10.txt

I closed the relevant issues on the tracker but there are still level issues open (particularly those discussed by Brendan during the SUIT meeting), see
https://github.com/suit-wg/information-model/issues

Your review comments are always appreciated.

Ciao
Hannes

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