Subject: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8446 (6138)

From: RFC Errata System <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2020 08:57:15 -0700 (PDT)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8446,
"The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol Version 1.3".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6138

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Ben Smyth <[email-masked]>

Section: 4.2.10

Original Text
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   For externally              
   provisioned PSKs, the associated values are those provisioned along 
   with the key.  For PSKs established via a NewSessionTicket message, 
   the associated values are those which were negotiated in the        
   connection which established the PSK.  

   ...

   For externally established             
   PSKs, the associated values are those provisioned along with the key.
   For PSKs established via a NewSessionTicket message, the associated  
   values are those negotiated in the connection during which the ticket
   was established.                                                     

Corrected Text
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   For externally              
   provisioned PSKs, the associated values are those provisioned along 
   with the key.  For PSKs established via a NewSessionTicket message, 
   the associated values are those which were negotiated in the        
   connection which established the PSK.  

Notes
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Drop largely verbatim duplicated text

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RFC8446 (draft-ietf-tls-tls13-28)
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Title               : The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol Version 1.3
Publication Date    : August 2018
Author(s)           : E. Rescorla
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Transport Layer Security
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG