Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] [v6ops] TSV-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras

From: Jen Linkova <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 1 Aug 2018 21:21:17 +1000

Hi Yoshi,
Thanks a lot for reviewing the draft and pointing out typos!
The -06 version has been submitted
(https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-06) and
those issues fixed.

On Wed, Jul 11, 2018 at 6:06 PM, Yoshifumi Nishida
<[email-masked]> wrote:
> Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05
> Reviewer: Yoshifumi Nishida
>
> I've reviewed this document as part of TSV-ART's ongoing effort to review
> key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport
> area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for their
> information and to allow them to address any issues raised. Please always CC
> [email-masked] if you reply to or forward this review.
>
> Summary: This document is ready for publication.
>
> - Major Issues: None.
>
> - Minor Issues:
>
>   Typos:
>
>   Page 6:
>        (Stateless Address Autoconfiguration, [RFC4682]
>           ->
>        (Stateless Address Autoconfiguration, [RFC4682])
>
>        (by sending an RA with the preferred_lifetime set to 0 in the
> corresponding PIO (Prefix Information option, [RFC4861])
>           ->
>         (by sending an RA with the preferred_lifetime set to 0 in the
> corresponding PIO (Prefix Information option, [RFC4861]))
>
> --
> Yoshi
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