Subject: [Tsvwg] RE: Quick Question about Internet Draft - RSVP Aggregation over MPLS TE tunnels

From: "Francois Le Faucheur \(flefauch\)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 22 Nov 2005 16:47:23 +0100

Hello Shawn,

>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Shawn Nicholl [mailto:[email-masked]] 
>> Sent: mardi 22 novembre 2005 01:19
>> To: Francois Le Faucheur (flefauch); Bruce Davie (bdavie)
>> Cc: Tamir (SCE) Erlichman
>> Subject: Quick Question about Internet Draft - RSVP 
>> Aggregation over MPLS TE tunnels
>> 
>> Hi Francois / Bruce,
>> 
>> Regarding the Internet Draft for "RSVP Aggregation
>> over MPLS TE tunnels":
>> 
>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rsvp-dste-00.txt
>> 
>> What does [MPLS-TE] reference?  It is not listed in
>> the references at the end of the document and I just
>> wanted to be clear on what it is referencing.

Yes, there is a dangling reference there.

To resolve that, I propose to replace the current text which says:
"
   [MPLS-TE] describes how MPLS TE Tunnels can be established via [RSVP-
   TE] and how these tunnels can be used to carry arbitrary aggregates 
   of traffic.
"
by
"
[MPLS-TE] describes how MPLS TE Tunnels can be used to carry arbitrary
aggregates of traffic for the purposes of traffic engineering. [RSVP-TE]
specifies how such MPLS TE Tunnels can be established using RSVP-TE
signaling.
"

Also, we will add the missing reference:
"
[MPLS-TE] Awduche et al., "Requirements for Traffic Engineering over
MPLS", RFC 2702,
        September 1999.
"

Thanks for pointing that out.

Francois

>> Thanks,
>> Shawn

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