Subject: FW: [XCON] Review of the XCON data model - Avshalom

From: "Oscar Novo" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 12 Oct 2007 12:42:55 +0200

Avshalom,
 
Thank you very much for your review. Comments inline as [ON et al]
 
Cheers,
 
Oscar

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From: Avshalom Houri [mailto:[email-masked]] 
Sent: 5. syyskuuta 2007 19:08
To: XCON
Cc: Dave Morgan; Roni Even; Gonzalo Camarillo (JO/LMF)
Subject: [XCON] Review of the XCON data model - Avshalom

Document: draft-ietf-xcon-common-data-model-05.txt

Section 4.1.1 - Second paragraph (last line of the paragraph) 
'require-participant' should be 'required-participant' 
 
[ON et al] OK
 
Section 4.1.1 - Last paragraph 

Why notify end of conference can be configured to be done before the
conference 
is starting by enabling it to be negative? 
 
[ON et al] Yes, that's a cut&paste typo. Thanks!
 
 Section 4.1.5.1.1 

It is not clear what is meant by sentence starting with: "If this
control is 
not specified" 
  
[ON et al] we have change the sentence to: "If this control is not
specified, the access to the control is not available to the client. "  
 
Section 4.1.5.1.2 

It is not clear what is meant by sentence starting with: "If this
control is 
not specified"
 
[ON et al] we have change the sentence to: "If this control is not
specified, the access to the control is not available to the client. "  
 
Section 4.5.1 - one paragraph before the last 

typo - difference -> different 
 
[ON et al] Thanks

Section 4..5.2 - The paragraph after figure 4 

"whose identity is present in the conditions." What it means? Probably
it 
meant that the provide-anonymity is True for the user. 
 
 [ON et al] That's a typo from previous versions of the draft.

--Avshalom

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