Sec 1, para 2. "augment" and "deviations" should be in italics; let the RPC deal with that.
Sec 1, para 4. You must be very proud of that sentence :)
Sec 1, para 5. "require now" --> "are now required" or, better, "MUST now be"

Sec 1.2, why single quotes on NDMA? And it *is* the title, not *defined as the* title.

Sec 2, the motivation is clear.

Sec 3, I like the details of how this solved real problems/complications.

Sec 4.2.1, you could delete the first sentence given the title says the same thing.

Sec 4.2.2, not sure why we see CODE BEGIN/CODE ENDS markers, leave for the RPC to fix. Would like to see a blank space between the modules in the code fragment.

Sec 7. "There are no writable" seems redundant given the next sentence. I would not split the paragraph at "Specifically, the following ..."