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Document: draft-ietf-pquip-hbs-state-02
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2026-01-16

Summary: Almost Ready.

This document describes Hash-based Signatures: State and Backup Management.
This document is somewhat complex. It is recommended to add usage scenarios in the main text and include pseudocode or implementation examples in the appendix to facilitate readers' understanding and comprehension.